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I’m Done with NaNo… Now What?

So it’s the first day of December and you’re coming off of that NaNoWriMo high. Even if you didn’t finish, you’ve done a lot this month! You’re exhausted and excited and your manuscript is both everything you want it to be and something you never want to look at again. So what should you do?

1. Take a deep breath.

You just wrote an entire novel in a month. That’s amazing! In one month you have done something that many people won’t do in their entire lifetime! So take a step back, make yourself a warm beverage (probably something decaffeinated, you’ve consumed enough caffeine during November), and try to take your mind off of your manuscript. Read a book for fun, binge watch something on Netflix (you should probably watch Jessica Jones, it’s fantastic), catch up on your sleep. Decompress.

2. Go back to your desk. Make notes.

After taking some time to relax, you may find that you’ve remembered something amazing that you want to include in your manuscript. You also may realize that your main romance has too much ‘insta-love’ or that the best friend character should really get killed off in the middle. Write that stuff down! Put it on a post-it note next to your computer or in the notebook you’ve used to plan out your NaNo. Don’t rush to add it in to your manuscript yet.


3. Take another break! Celebrate! You’ve earned it.

Go out with your friends/family/kids/significant other. They probably didn’t see you a lot in November and might feel a bit neglected. Tell them about what you’re writing (but try not to talk their ear off). Have them celebrate with you. This will help get your mind off of the manuscript. It will help you revitalize your creativity and be able to go back to your draft with fresh eyes.


4. Okay. Now it’s time to re-read.

The fun and games are over and now it’s time to actually look over what you created. WARNING: It may be a bit scary. You will probably dislike a lot of what you’ve written. That’s okay. Writing is re-writing and though it may be scary, you’ll have to spend a lot of time with your drafts. Writing 50,000 words in a month is crazy, so your writing isn’t going to be perfect. Spend this time re-reading your draft with fresh eyes. Don’t read for editorial errors. Don’t go into the document and fix anything yet. Read for content. Make sure that your characters are doing what you want them to do, and that your plot aligns with your vision. Write any major points down so you can go back and fix them once it’s time to edit. Reading over your manuscript without a red pen in hand will help you look at your NaNo with more objective eyes; you should be able to focus on the big picture, not the minute details.

5. Buckle down, it’s editing time…

The time has come. Take out the post-its you’ve made during the previous steps and start making changes to put them in action. Shift around scenes and write new ones. Make your plot clear and your characters interesting. Try and catch any major plot holes. Skim for typos or any inconsistencies (if you’ve renamed a character, make sure their old name isn’t still in there). Start polishing up your manuscript into the draft that you’ve envisioned it to be.

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6. Take another step back. Have other people read your work.

You’ve made all of your major edits, and now it’s time to set your baby free. Send it to any beta readers you may have (it’s so, so important to have beta readers). After you go through their edits and make changes, send it to a freelance editor. Do your research to see what editor fits your need the best. We would love to edit your manuscript (if our schedules permits), but there are also tons of freelance editors out there. Ask editors to do sample edits if you want. Spend time trying to figure out who will help your manuscript (and you) the most. Once you’ve found someone, send them your manuscript. It may be difficult trusting someone else to edit your baby, but there comes a time when it has to leave your desk and you have to kiss it goodbye for awhile.


This may sound daunting, and that is totally normal. Writing and editing a book is daunting! But if you don’t write your novel, who will? Writing is a magical, grueling process, but there’s a reason you were drawn to your manuscript. NaNo can be crazy, take time before you edit to remember why you fell in love with your story idea. It doesn’t matter if you want to self-publish or go the traditional route, it’s important to take time for yourself as you edit. Be sure to take breaks, be healthy, and just remember to breathe. This is a long road, but you can make it through to the other side.


Not feeling confident? These are some published novels that were written during NaNoWriMo!

  • Fangirl by Rainbow Rowell
  • The Night Circus by Erin Morgenstern
  • Don’t Let Me Go by J.H. Trumble
  • Water for Elephants by Sara Gruen
  • Cinder by Marissa Meyer


A Guide to Books About Writing

Books about writing are fantastic. Though they don’t tell you absolutely everything you need to know about writing or the process, they can actually be pretty useful. That being said, books about writing are subjective. Not everyone will find every writing book useful, and that’s okay. However, you never know if it will be useful unless you try it. So, we have compiled a list of writing books that we think you might find useful (and don’t be afraid to try them)!

On Writing by Stephen King

On Writing is arguably the writing book that is recommended the most. Though this list isn’t in order from ‘best writing book’ to ‘worst’, it’s a given that On Writing would be at the top. There’s a reason everybody recommends it, it is pretty great. On Writing is part memoir and part writing advice. King recounts memories from his childhood and pairs them with writing antidotes. As King moves on to talk about his own writing career, he discusses how formative his writing has been to his own life. On Writing gives writing advice in a way that’s easily digestible. However, King doesn’t try and protect your feelings. His writing tips and stories are blunt and might tell you exactly what you need to hear. There’s a reason this book is so heavily recommended by those who have read it.

Confessions of a Freelance Penmonkey by Chuck Wendig

Confessions of a Freelance Penmonkey is not for the faint of heart. In this novel, Chuck Wendig has compiled a list of blog posts he has written at his blog terribleminds. These blog posts are blunt and pretty vulgar. However, at the core they hold some great writing advice. If you are looking for unconventional advice and have a dark sense of humor, Confessions of a Freelance Penmonkey is for you. Wendig gives advice on nearly every part of the writing industry. From drafting to publishing to marketing, Wendig has your back.

Writing Irresistible Kidlit: The Ultimate Guide for Crafting Fiction for Young Adults and Middle Grade Readers by Mary Kole

This is the first YA/MG oriented book on this list, and it is fantastic. Mary Kole uses her extensive background in publishing to give writers of Young Adult and Middle Grade books the perfect writing advice. Her guide gives information on the market, the different parts of writing a successful YA/MG novel, and writing as a career. However, the best part about Writing Irresistible Kidlit is how easy to read it is. This book doesn’t read like a normal guide; you just want to keep reading it. If you are writing a Young Adult or Middle Grade novel, or even thinking about writing one, you should pick up Mary Kole’s guide.

Before writing this post, I put out a call on twitter to ask for any other writing advice books that people have found helpful. Though I haven’t read these and can’t give a personal opinion about how effective they can be, they come highly recommended from Teen Eyes followers, so you should probably check them out. Someone on twitter also recommended that you read On Writing by Stephen King (see, I told you that everyone should read it!).

Go Teen Writers: How to Turn Your First Draft Into a Published Book by Stephanie Morrill and Jill Williamson

Go Teen Writers is written by two published authors and is directed at teen writers (though I’m sure it can be useful to all ages). Go Teen Writers takes you on a step-by-step bases through how to publish your novel, starting at the very first draft.

Wonderbook: The Illustrated Guide to Creating Imaginative Fiction by Jeff VanderMeer

I hadn’t heard of this guide before, but after taking a look at it, it seems fantastic. VanderMeer offers a guide to writing in a drastically unconventional way- through pictures. Wonderbook also includes essay from some of the most famous names in fantasy writing.

Have you read and loved any books about writing that aren’t listed here? Have you read any of these? If so, what did you think? 

– Z.S.

Are We Done Yet? Tips on Increasing Your Writing Speed by J.B. Cantwell

This is the first in a new series of blog posts that Teen Eyes will be featuring about the writing processes of different writers. Today we have J.B. Cantwell, who is not only a Teen Eyes client, but a fantastic middle grade writer. You can find links to purchase her books at the end of this post.

I do a lot of things fast. Write. Read. Drink. Talk. Ride my favorite pony up the hill (The faster, the better, man. YEE-HAW!).

But faster is obviously not always better.

I’m new to this whole writing game, and when I first started I had no idea of what a good daily word count was. Early on, in an attempt to try to figure out how this whole book-writing thing is actually supposed to go down, I read Stephen King’s On Writing. In this wonderfully entertaining read, King talks about how any author worth his salt should be writing 2000 words a day, every day, no exceptions (except, maybe, hospitalization). I remember thinking that was nuts, and I fretted over how I would ever come close to measuring up to this mainstream master’s expectations. Back then, I was lucky if I spit out 1K a day.

As time went on, and I delved further into the world of independent publishing, I realized that a lot of my peers were writing 2K a day, and many of them were writing way more than that. I figured that surely the people writing 5K, 8K, some even 10K a day were ending up with nothing but crap. But I was also jealous.

Here I must insert a disclaimer. I know not everyone reading this is interested in self-publishing, and that’s totally okay. But for me, the fact that I self-publish is crucial to the discussion about my process. I have to write fast, and here’s why…

In the indie world, volume is really where it’s at. To get anywhere, to keep your name in people’s thoughts as they flit between Amazon searches, you have to be good and you have to be fast. Indies don’t have anything near the advertising dollars that are put behind traditionally published books. We don’t have access to major reviewers. We don’t have access to the same level of marketing to children, a big issue for the middle grade author in particular. The visibility of frequent publishing (aside from craft, of course) is really our only way to compete with the slow-moving traditional publishing houses.

But just because we have to write fast doesn’t mean get to abandon quality.


Let’s take a minute to talk about craft. Just because you can type 8K words a day doesn’t mean that they’ll be good words. As a starting point, you need to figure out how many good words you are able to produce each day; that is to say, words that need maybe two or three edits before being publication or query-worthy.

And you need to decide how high you are aiming with regards to quality.

I like to imagine writing quality as a dial. On the low side, we have basic language education. You speak English. Good job. In the middle, when books start to read well and become entertaining, we have craft. And over on the high side, we have God. I’m not a religious woman, so it’s not the actual almighty I’m talking about here. When I say God, I mean high art. Award winning. Magic. Words that stick to your soul. Stories you’ll never forget.

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So, when you consider how fast you want to write, and how many edits you want to do before moving on to publishing or querying, you have to consider where on the dial you are aiming. Many audiences (actually most, I tend to think) are perfectly happy with a well crafted book, and they’re too distracted to appreciate God anyways. But that’s not quite enough for me, or other more careful readers. Personally, I feel that I currently have a decent grasp on craft. I am writing hard and hoping to push over into the God side of the spectrum as I learn and grow in my craft.

So I’ve made my decision, and I’m aiming for in between craft and God. I want to be good. Really good.

For me, there is no better way to do this than to practice. I only have so much patience, so I’m not going to practice on the same book for three years to polish it shiny and then try to sell it as God to a Big 5 house. People do this. You might be doing this right now with your own manuscript. But I can’t wait that long between projects. Like I said, I like to do things fast, which means a reasonable amount of project turnover to hold my interest. This does not meant that I’m putting out crap (at least, I hope not). I don’t use my impatience and a need to write fast as an excuse to get lazy with my storytelling. And I don’t need to, because I really believe that with each book or short story I write, my writing improves tremendously. The more I write, the less major structural editing I need to do. The more I write, the cleaner the first drafts are. All of this saves time.

Instead of honing the same manuscript for those three years, I am practicing as I go. My writing gets better month by month, and as I flex that muscle I also get faster. Currently, I have built up to being able to write between 3-4K words a day (on a good day). But if I slack too much, get too distracted by life, get too caught up in editing instead of drafting, I end up slowing waaaay down. Turns out this whole thing really needs practice, and rewrites, and new stories, and constant consideration. For me, that means tackling, and finishing, projects, and then moving on.

Writer Types

There are two main types of writers. Outliners and Pantsers. An Outliner is someone who does extensive research and gives a lot of thought to what they’re going to write before they write it. They draw up detailed plot scenarios, many of them on a chapter by chapter, scene by scene basis. Doing this helps them write lightning fast because they know, scene by scene, exactly what is going to happen next.

Then there are Pantsers. Pantsers just sit down at the keyboard and start pounding on it, often giving fairly little thought about what they plan to write. Usually, there’s a rough idea, maybe a rough outline about the world their characters inhabit and what’s going to happen to the protagonist over the course of the entire book, but that’s often it. They just hit the pavement and run with it.

I land somewhere in between these two types, but I err on the side of being a Pantser. On the one hand, having an outline can help me write faster, but only a little bit. Also, I find that if I’m writing something really emotional, an outline only gets me so far. That said, for novels I do write an outline. I usually pay attention to it for the first half or so and then forget I ever made it at all. But if things are going so well that I’ve forgotten about the outline, that’s okay by me. It means the story has sprouted wings, and that’s the best I could hope for.

Figure out how you want to proceed here. Maybe try starting your next project in a different manner than previous projects. Are you a pantser? Try sitting down for a day or three and making a detailed outline. See where it takes your mind. Are you an outliner? Try sitting down with no plan at all and see what happens after a few hours. In either experiment, you’ll start to learn which types of approaches lend to better stories and faster writing.

And take a look a the book 2K to 10K by Rachel Aaron for ideas about what you might be capable of based on this decision.


Anothoer thing that helps me get faster is scheduling. I have some fun things I like to do in the middle of the day, and I don’t let myself do them until I’ve done half of my work for the day: 1500 words. I am very lucky in that I have all day to play with, so my schedule works like this…

Get up. Suck down coffee

Drop monsters at school



Get off butt


Take a shower

Go do fun stuff

Come back


Pick up monsters

(Notice that nowhere on this list does the word vacuum appear. Still waiting to hit the big time so I can afford that full-time maid. But I digress…)

One thing I do that can sometimes help if I’m struggling with a particular scene is to work on two different projects every day. In the morning I’ll draft, and in the afternoon I’ll edit something else. It gives my brain a break from chewing on the problem of the day, and I get more done overall. It’s actually more difficult to split my focus like this, but it gives me an out if I really can’t decide where to go next after that first 1500.

While I don’t do extensive outlining like some, I do have a big ‘ol schedule posted all over the wall next to my desk. As I’ve come to realize that writing novels takes me a while (maybe a month longer each than I would like), I decided I should start releasing short stories related to my Aster Wood series, and I threw in a new series for lower middle grade readers while I was at it. This decision, apart from being sort of fun, is all about branding and visibility. In regards to the Aster Wood shorts, I get to explore the minds of some of my characters in depth, and I also get a shiny new title out every month or two. And the pressure of knowing that I’m supposed to be getting a short out each month is enough to light a fire under me to not slack off. Also, something I’ve discovered since I’ve been working on the shorts is that it fires me up for the day. For the shorts, I sit down at the keyboard and pants it, fingers flying over the keys. Once I start hearing the ticking of my fingernails and see the words start to take shape, I’m suddenly in the zone. It’s a win win. And it helps to do a small, less intimidating project when you’re having a hard time getting going. If you get stuck or overly distracted, write something. Anything. Sometimes even a detailed email will get my fingers into the groove of tick-tick-ticking on the keyboard, and suddenly my brain frees itself from the mud and starts producing again.

This writing thing takes an enormous amount of determination and discipline. But the only way to get faster, most would agree, is to write every day. And that’s tough when your first grader is puking on the classroom rug and the cat just pooped in the hall. Again. But you gotta try. It’s like dieting. When you fall off the wagon, you gotta shove a carrot back in that greedy mouth and keep on going.


I consider writing stories to be a problem-solving endeavor (which is why I like it). I create a problem for myself to solve (decide on characters, world, conflicts), and then I have to solve it in a way that is hopefully engaging and entertaining. The problem is…that I’m creating problems. A novel is like a giant puzzle, intricate and infuriating once you start to dig in there. One of the reasons outlining doesn’t work well for me is because of this puzzle-like aspect to writing; I need wide-open spaces with a lot of wiggle room to navigate my way around problems. When I’m faced with the problem of the day, trying to figure out how my character feels or what he’s going to do next or whom he’s going to meet, I will frequently stare into space and inevitably ask myself why the hell I’m doing this.

But my problems are rarely solved while sitting in front of the computer screen. For me, the biggest challenges I encounter in my writing are usually solved in the bathtub. When I get so stressed out about not being able to solve a problem, I hop in the tub with little focused effort on how I’m going to solve it. The less I focus, the better, and usually by the time I’m in the water, I’ve come up with a solution. It just pops into my brain out of thin air. I don’t know why.

So take a walk. Go grocery shopping. Play with the dog. Take a nap. But when your break is over, get right back to it so you don’t backslide.


If you want to write faster than you currently do…

  1. Figure out how many words you can currently write each day that will only require 2-3 edits before becoming publication worthy (or query worthy, as the case may be).

  2. Decide: Craft or God? Where on the spectrum are you aiming?

  3. Come up with a different project that you can work on at the same time as your main endeavor to see if you can train yourself to double your word output. Even an extra 500 words a day on a side project is going to net you 182,500 words a year.

  4. Find your bathtub. In other words, take a break when you’re really struggling. Just make sure it’s only an hour or so or else you’ll fall back to general procrastination. And good ideas do not come during procrastination.

  5. Schedule yourself a few months out. Print out some free calendars and post them on your wall next to your desk. Look at them frequently so you don’t forget your goal dates.

  6. Above all, keep going. You might not be writing your God novel this time around. You might still be practicing, like me. But move forward.

 Good luck to us all, fellow writers! Here’s hoping we all learn, over time, to produce great books on tight schedules. Or, at the very least, hit our deadlines.

If you would like to buy her books, you can do so by going to these links-

Aster Wood and the Lost Maps of Almara (Book 1)-


Aster Wood and the Books of Leveling (Book 2)-


Aster Wood and the Blackburn Son (Book 3)


6th Grade Supernatural: Abigail’s Curse (Pre-Order)


Interested in sharing your writing process with us? Email zoe.teeneyes@gmail.com